Key information about my particular project that I would
like my peer reviewers to know is that my main topic is obamacare and why it is
not the best solution for America’s increased health insurance costs.
Major issues or weaknesses in the final cut would be whether
or not I achieved an emotional appeal. I tried to make my argument personal by
talking about how my family was affected by ObamaCare but I am not sure I was
successful in doing so.
Major virtues or strengths in the final cut I would day is
the editing. I made sure to include music and transitions and videos are
perfectly cut to the exact second I wanted them at.
Here is a working hyperlink to the fine cut.
Sofia,
ReplyDeleteI think your explanation of how Obamacare affected your family did work. I understood more why you would pick this topic and it helped establish yourself as the author. When you talked about how many people are affected, and included yourself, it made the issue seem very prevalent.
Sofia,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you included your personal experience with how Obamacare affected your family, however, I would have liked to hear more about how it affected you. Overall, very well done and a lot of good information included!
Cynthia