Editorial Report 13b

I also altered the first body section of my video essay. I found it unnecessary to introduce Jim Demint as an opponent to ObamaCare because it isn’t really a specific person who is opposed to it, it is more of a huge group like the republican party.

Rough Cut

In order to understand the situation and its entirety, each stakeholder must be introduced.
Obviously Obama is the biggest stakeholder, considering the fact that ObamaCare was his doing.
 (Photo of Obama will be included)

He states, “In the United States of America, health care is not a privilege for the fortunate few, it is a right. And I knew that if we didn’t do something about our unfair and inefficient health care system, it would keep driving up our deficits, it would keep burdening our businesses, it would keep hurting our families, and it would keep holding back economic growth.”

Additionally, we have the key player fueling the “defund ObamaCare” movement, Jim DeMint. This man has done everything in his power to thwart the president’s health care law. He is an American politician and a member of the Republican party. He is also the president of the Heritage Foundation, a conservative thinktank. 
 (Photo of DeMint will be included)

Revised Version:

In order to understand the situation and its entirety, it is important to understand Obama’s reasoning behind ObamaCare. Obviously Obama is the biggest stakeholder, considering the fact that ObamaCare was his doing.

 (Photo of Obama will be included)


He states, “In the United States of America, health care is not a privilege for the fortunate few, it is a right. And I knew that if we didn’t do something about our unfair and inefficient health care system, it would keep driving up our deficits, it would keep burdening our businesses, it would keep hurting our families, and it would keep holding back economic growth.”