Sunday, April 3, 2016

Peer Review for Jason Boley

In this post, I will peer review Jason Boley's content outline, which can be found here.

The detail and development featured in the outline is very organized and well thought out. Jason includes what exactly his plan is for each paragraph. I have almost a perfect idea of what his rough draft will look like. He also includes specific sources, like azcentral and information from articles form environmental groups. The only advice I have for Jason is to be specific on how the sources will support his argument. Honestly, this is one of the best drafts I have seen, I am very impressed!

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