Sunday, April 24, 2016

Editorial Report

The content changed quite a bit actually. I decided to take a lot of information out because I felt like I was starting to sound repetitive. Therefore, I took out an entire body section.

Rough Cut:

Body Section 2:
So, what exactly are the so-called benefits of ObamaCare? According to obama... tens of millions of uninsured people will get access to affordable, high-quality health insurance through Medicaid expansion and over half of uninsured Americans can get free or low cost health insurance.

However, what Obama fails to consider is that in order to get the money to insure all these people, there are new taxes that may affect you directly, like the individual mandate and the employer mandate.

Video: "A republican response to ObamaCare"

Jim Demint wrote an article for the wall street journal and states, “We know that premiums are going up due to ObamaCare. Americans are getting notices in -their mailboxes every day. In North Carolina, for example, many consumers will find their premiums almost double when shopping on the government exchanges. The hardest-hit states, such as Georgia, Arizona, Vermont and North Dakota, will see premium increases up to 150%.”

Revised Version:

So, what exactly are the so-called benefits of ObamaCare? According to obama... tens of millions of uninsured people will get access to affordable, high-quality health insurance through Medicaid expansion and over half of uninsured Americans can get free or low cost health insurance.

However, what Obama fails to consider is that in order to get the money to insure all these people, there are new taxes that may affect you directly, like the individual mandate and the employer mandate.

(include a video on the new taxes)

***notice how I took how the Jim Demint quote.




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