Sunday, April 17, 2016

Editorial Report B

In this post, I will revise my first body section of my script.

Un-revised Body Section 1 Raw Content:

In order to understand the situation and its entirety, each stakeholder must be introduced.
Obviously Obama is the biggest stakeholder, considering the fact that ObamaCare was his doing.

He states, “In the United States of America, health care is not a privilege for the fortunate few, it is a right. And I knew that if we didn’t do something about our unfair and inefficient health care system, it would keep driving up our deficits, it would keep burdening our businesses, it would keep hurting our families, and it would keep holding back economic growth.”

Additionally, we have the key player fueling the “defund ObamaCare” movement, Jim DeMint. This man has done everything in his power to thwart the president’s health care law. He is an American politician and a member of the Republican party. He is also the president of the Heritage Foundation, a conservative thinktank. 

Revised Body Section 1 Raw Content:


I decided to leave it in it’s exact format because it will be the most beneficial to my project.

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