Sunday, March 27, 2016

Peer Review for Diego Alcantara

In this post, I will peer review Diego Alcantara's project 2 rough draft, "Computer Engineering: A Comprehensive Guide on How to Write for the Field."

I decided to focus on activity 1 for Diego because the only thing that might be a little excessive is his content. The QRG in my opinion is very well-structured and organized. He has several hyperlinks, images, bolded words, and subtitles which portrays a perfect QRG. However, his document is very long.

The purpose of QRG is a brief explanation of a certain topic that is easy to read and understand. Yes, Diego's document is extremely easy to read...but it is 9 pages which might cause the reader to lose interest in it. I suggest he cuts some small and unimportant details out of the rough draft.

I admire Diego's dedication to this project, it is clear that he has spent a lot of time on his rough draft. The only advice I have is to clean it up a little. :) Very well done!


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