Editorial Report 15b

In this post, I will provide an edited and revised part of my script for my podcast.

Rough Cut:

As project 2 came around, I was incredibly motivated to get an A on this one to save my grade from the last project. After reading the major project assignment document, I found project 2 to be rather interesting. I decided to get a head start and email a few physiology professors about interviews. After anxiously waiting for days, I got only denied responses about meeting. I started to stress out after the 8^th professor emailed me back saying now was not a good time for interviews. So I was already behind with this project due to the delayed responses of professors. 

When I did go to my interviews I was really nervous because I had never been the one interviewing I was always the one interviewed. This was definitely a new situation that I had to adapt to. Once I finally got my interviews done, I made sure to put all my energy into making a flawless QRG. I researched all the genre conventions as well as the project requirements. I felt much more confident turning this assignment in and when I got my grade back I was ecstatic. I put a lot more time into this project and learned how to adapt to a completely new situation.

Revised Cut:

As project 2 came around, I was incredibly motivated to get an A on this one to save my grade from the last project. After reading the major project assignment document, I found project 2 to be rather interesting. Critical thinking and composing is incredibly important and will only become more important as I grow older. I will need to know how to speak to others professionally or in a way that fits whatever situation I am in. I also loved the idea that this one was focused on talking to professionals in my field. 

I decided to get a head start and email a few physiology professors about interviews. After anxiously waiting for days, I got only denied responses about meeting. I started to stress out after the 8^th professor emailed me back saying now was not a good time for interviews. So I was already behind with this project due to the delayed responses of professors. This was probably the most difficult part of the project because the physiology professors that finally replied to me willing to be interviewed had offices off campus in the heath building. So I had to find means of transportation. 

When I did go to my interviews I was really nervous because I had never been the one interviewing I was always the one interviewed. This was definitely a new situation that I had to adapt to. Once I finally got my interviews done, I made sure to put all my energy into making a flawless QRG. I researched all the genre conventions as well as the project requirements. I felt much more confident turning this assignment in and when I got my grade back I was ecstatic. I put a lot more time into this project and learned how to adapt to a completely new situation.

Answers to Audience Questions:

Again, after listening to my first rough cut, I concluded that it was not detailed enough. Therefore, i decided to make each section of my podcast more detailed.

This only changed the form of my podcast by making it longer.